argh! *winces*

Has anyone else ever noticed that after reading really atrocious bad fic (blame sniffing around bad fic communities for this), even your *own* work starts to read like trash?

*winces* as she looks over Division and hears everything that was initially intended as a glimpse of Leah's thought processes as shaky language use and even shakier description, To say nothing of the intentional! rambling on.

In short: Ow, ow, ow! *resolves never to go sniffing in the badfic comms again, under threat of thirty lashes with a Reams frozen noodle!*

Shard it...