You know, I've never seen you write anything very long, but it's amazing what you sometimes fit into such a small space. And I think that was one of the best examples I've seen of that. You captured exactly what the char was feeling, so the rest of us could feel some of it ourselves. Good going.
BTW, what you said about never going on msn is true. lol I noticed you put an msn addi in your lj info earlier this week, but haven't seen you on yet.
Miah